we decided the fonts were hard to read and to dark for the type of magazine so i made them into a thinner font and changed the colours to the colour themes on the magazine.
also the name of the band does need to be the most bold part of the page but it was again boring and dark so i decided to make the name of the band lighter thinner and bigger, also replaced it on the page.
this shows the changes i have made to the title, i used the text tool and i made the same title in the dame way twice but just changed the colour of one, this gives the effect of a shadow. and highlights the band name.
this shows my final magazine cover, as you can see i have changed the colour and the style of text to highlight it more and match it more the the theme of the magazine.
i have changed the band name to highlight what the main story of the magazine will be.